From bdd8ad94744f8a2ecb3ca6d20622679ed6b55a4d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Leon van Zantvoort <zantvoort@beatgridmedia.com>
Date: Wed, 8 Jul 2026 08:43:38 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] feat(website): sharpen landing meta description

Front-load the differentiators within Google's ~160 character display
limit and close on the quickstart promise. Applied to the description,
og:description, and twitter:description alike.
---
 website/src/pages/index.js | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/src/pages/index.js b/website/src/pages/index.js
index 5e53d872c..29d17734b 100644
--- a/website/src/pages/index.js
+++ b/website/src/pages/index.js
@@ -675,7 +675,7 @@ export default function Home() {
         <title>Storm · The type-safe Kotlin ORM</title>
         <meta
           name="description"
-          content="Storm is a type-safe, SQL-first Kotlin ORM. Concise data-class entities, one-line queries, immutable records. Every query explicit: no proxies, no N+1, no persistence context."
+          content="Storm is a type-safe, SQL-first Kotlin ORM. Immutable data-class entities, one-line queries checked at compile time, no proxies, no N+1. Try it in 5 minutes."
         />
         <meta
           name="keywords"
@@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ export default function Home() {
         />
         <meta
           property="og:description"
-          content="Storm is a type-safe, SQL-first Kotlin ORM. Concise data-class entities, one-line queries, immutable records. Every query explicit: no proxies, no N+1, no persistence context."
+          content="Storm is a type-safe, SQL-first Kotlin ORM. Immutable data-class entities, one-line queries checked at compile time, no proxies, no N+1. Try it in 5 minutes."
         />
         <meta
           name="twitter:title"
@@ -699,7 +699,7 @@ export default function Home() {
         />
         <meta
           name="twitter:description"
-          content="Storm is a type-safe, SQL-first Kotlin ORM. Concise data-class entities, one-line queries, immutable records. Every query explicit: no proxies, no N+1, no persistence context."
+          content="Storm is a type-safe, SQL-first Kotlin ORM. Immutable data-class entities, one-line queries checked at compile time, no proxies, no N+1. Try it in 5 minutes."
         />
         {/* Structured data so search engines can identify Storm as a
             developer tool for Kotlin/Java and consolidate it with its GitHub